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pokeadeadfrog Featured By Owner May 16, 2005
Thats really cool.
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Ur work rocks, as if you're only 17!
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alothnal Featured By Owner May 17, 2005
pfft i am 17 and that's old. haha :p
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blueseas Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2004
yipes...stripes....:D

Great idea, fun layout. This is really cool.
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oisoyboy Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2004
nice stripes!
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aRtistic-rEbellion Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2003
Hello, let's move right into the crits.

frame 1: top right corner, you have good motion but that top right corner blotch of color pulls the viewer away from the main subject, being yourself. Good composition - the way you split yourself just center keeps the viewer at a split standpoint, which is good in artwork [ im an artist ]

frame 2: this frame has a particularly big contrast between dark/light. Do you have a meaning for it? was it supposed to mean anything or did it just happen? If it has an interpretable meaning i'd say keep it because its part of your style, but otherwise may want to lower the contrast levels to bring it to more of a monotone 3 frame picture.
Again, you kept the composition in good place, it is sometimes [ most of the time ] terrible to place an image dead center, you kept a nice composition by sliding yourself off to the right. Great job.

frame 3: I personally would have suggested you take a classic 3 trio frame. You have center left panel, you could have made, top [ behind couch slighty off to left ] and finally, the third panel a left [ in front of the couch ] picture. You handled this well. As every photographer, practice is needed for mastery. Good work, do not be discouraged. Criticism is to comment on the work at hand, not the person themselves. Well done.
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yumgum Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2003
wow. I saw that thumbnail and I knew I was going to be like, WOW.
It's gorgeous! Gorgeous, I tell you! FAV!
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BrentonJ Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2003   Photographer
hehe, cool!
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crushedovernight Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2003
this is really cool. I love how you pieced it all together. the colour rocks too. +fav! great job.
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