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©2003-2009 ~alothnal
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:iconcrushedovernight:
this is really cool. I love how you pieced it all together. the colour rocks too. +fav! great job.
:iconbrentonj:
hehe, cool!

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- Brent
:iconyumgum:
wow. I saw that thumbnail and I knew I was going to be like, WOW.
It's gorgeous! Gorgeous, I tell you! FAV!
:iconartistic-rebellion:
Hello, let's move right into the crits.

frame 1: top right corner, you have good motion but that top right corner blotch of color pulls the viewer away from the main subject, being yourself. Good composition - the way you split yourself just center keeps the viewer at a split standpoint, which is good in artwork [ im an artist ]

frame 2: this frame has a particularly big contrast between dark/light. Do you have a meaning for it? was it supposed to mean anything or did it just happen? If it has an interpretable meaning i'd say keep it because its part of your style, but otherwise may want to lower the contrast levels to bring it to more of a monotone 3 frame picture.
Again, you kept the composition in good place, it is sometimes [ most of the time ] terrible to place an image dead center, you kept a nice composition by sliding yourself off to the right. Great job.

frame 3: I personally would have suggested you take a classic 3 trio frame. You have center left panel, you could have made, top [ behind couch slighty off to left ] and finally, the third panel a left [ in front of the couch ] picture. You handled this well. As every photographer, practice is needed for mastery. Good work, do not be discouraged. Criticism is to comment on the work at hand, not the person themselves. Well done.
:iconblueseas:
yipes...stripes....:D

Great idea, fun layout. This is really cool.

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'Loneliness is a strange gift.' - E.B. White
:iconpokeadeadfrog:
Thats really cool.
:)
Ur work rocks, as if you're only 17!

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~Tescos is not reality~
:iconalothnal:
pfft i am 17 and that's old. haha :p

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